Please read the following essay and submit a score for each category.


Many young people in the UAE spend too much time watching television.
What are some solutions to this problem?

You should write at least 250 words.
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.


In our changing world, many thing have been changed sience our parent time. Today, people use technology in every thing, for teaching, learing, and entartinment, and some people use that technology too much and spend too much time and that cause a lot of problems. One of these problems is that many children and young people in UAE spend more time watching TV. In my opinin, waching TV too much and weasting time have many bad effects such as, stay away from friend and family and some children and young girls and boys take bad things from TV. I believe thier are many solution to this problem, and in this essay, I will illustrate some of these solutions.

Firstly, the most important solution is connected with family. For example, parents should spend more time with thier children and try to make thier children like to spend more time with them. Moreover, parents should put rules at home to tell thier children when they can watch TV and how long they can watch it. In addition, parents have to let thier to spend more time with thier friends and do some activety with them. I think, if parent do such thing like that, children will not be bored and they will not spend more time watching TV.

Secondly, the second solution to this problem is education. For example, we should teach our children about how to mange thier time and how to be more respinsible about thier chouses. In addition, we can make some camp like the summer camp and let them be part of it, met friend from diffrent places and have a lot of activety with them. So, as I sead before, they will not be bored, and they will stay away from TV for a while.

To conclued, In this essay, you have seen some solution for young people who spend too much time watching TV, and these solution are spend more time with family and friend and educate your children. I think, if children and young girls and boyes find something stop them been bored and helpless they will not spend more time watching TV.


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